Room 8 visited the building site to see what progress had been made with the building project. Read Kashya's progress report.
This morning we went for a walk to see the super duper Dental Clinic. It was different because the builders put the floor on. I saw the floor half done.
Then we went to the hall and I saw a man with a broom. He was in the hall sweeping. I saw an electric pump. The man told us that the pump was getting the water out. I could hear the pump, pump, pumping.
4 comments:
Hi Kashya I really enjoyed your story and how you gave the reader lots of detail Keep it up
HI Kashya i like your story and you did use alot of discriptive words good girl ... from Mum
very interesting writing kashya keep it up
cool writing kashya
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