Friday, September 4, 2009

The Tortoise and the Hare



This week in writing we have been learning to add direct speech into our narratives. We have focussed on the famous fable, The Tortoise and the Hare. Come and listen to Laita and Jorja's narrative.



5 comments:

Room 10 Grey Lynn said...

Hi Jorja and Laita,
Great retelling the story. We could really tell what you were talking about. We think you're going to become amazing storytellers! Who would you be in the race? Keep up the good work!
From Jennifer and Matt.

Tyla-marie said...

That was a really great blog .I wish I will be able to see another blog of yours.

From Tyla-Marie Room11

LaChandra Lett said...

Great Job Jorja and Laita. We all have learned a lesson from this story. I learned to never underestimate my opponent. I know that you girls have learned something from this story as well. Keep up the good work and remember "slow and steady wins the race!"

LaChandra Lett
University of South Alabama
Dr. Stranges' EDM 310 TT4 class

kris said...

This was a great story and I think that if you keep up the good work you will become a great writer and story teller. Keep up the good work.

Kris Killingsworth
University of South Alabama
Dr. Stranges EDM 310 TT4 class

Keating Helms said...

Great storytelling skills! I am not a very good storyteller. I am so jealous!


Keating Helms
University of South Alabama
Dr. Stranges EDM 310 TT4 class