Sunday, March 29, 2009

Yummy fruit descriptions

In Writing this week we have been focussing on descriptions. We wrote about the yummy orange.
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5 comments:

Manaiakalani said...

Hi Room 9
What wonderful descriptions of oranges you have written. I can't believe how many interesting details you have included.
You are very lucky to have a teacher who makes such a funky blog for you to share your work on.
Keep it up
Mrs Burt

Anonymous said...

Aw Hi Raufy my honey,you were so good reading about oranges and talking about how juicy they are you made me hungry for an orange. You are an awsome reader Raufy. Well done! And I like your talk about when you all went to the beach! You are a very good speaker!You have a cool class. Great Room 9! Love You Raufy, from Nanna in Perth.
Hey Raufy, you are a really good reader and you are doing so well. Love from Aunty Clarissa. We All Say Hi Raufy, Keep up the good work! Love From us all here in Perth Australia xxx

Anonymous said...

Sup Raufy Ma G

good reading ma bro. Keep it up and keep doing good at school. Will see you soon
From Uncle Luke LMS

Kane said...

Hello Rauf,
I like the way you were reading Rauf

from Kane

Anonymous said...

Great Reading Raufy ...I like your class Blog too . keep up the good work room 9 from Penny Raufs Mum